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Haras

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Another picture of my girl Haras. She might be chibby but isn't scared of showing off skin mostly because she is proud to be different. I had an over all good time with this one. I wish a few things had turned out differently but I think that is with any picture I draw. lol. 
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Hikari-Miyako's avatar
Hello ! I came from project comment Constructivecomment 
First, I have to say that I kinda like your artwork, since it depicts your character very well, I love how the description you made fits her, and the strong vibes that are coming from her. Really good job ! I love the clothes, and you did very well the shading and lightning effects. Everything makes sense for me and I don't see anything off in that aspect.
However, I'd like to point few things to help you :)

-> The hands contrast a bit with everything, because you put lot of efforts in details everywhere, except for the hands, why not trying to make her hand on her hip, like a pinup? That way you would make the description fit even better.

-> The pose is kinda "stiff" I mean, the left leg seems a bit off in term of rotation. If she's trying a provocative pose, make it more obvious :)

-> The boobs seems off as well. I get she has big boobys because she has some flesh, but the shape of her boobs feel a little off. Especially when you take in consideration she doesn't wear a bra, that's not how gravity works haha !

Anyway, this is a good thing, really ! I'd love to see more !